Red spy.tf's CCA Application [ACCEPTED]

[b]Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:63718907
 
 
[b]Steam Name: '[FG]' The Ninja Spy
 
 
[b]How old are you? (OPTIONAL):16
 
 
[b]Most Commonly Used Character(s): James Rodriguez  [Morag Gard] Vortigaunt
 
 
[b]How long have you been playing on the server?: 5 days,4 on the forums.
 
 
[b]Why do you want to become a Metropolice Officer?: I have always liked the Metro Police since I started HL2RP. I always wanted to be the figure behind the mask keeping crimes out of the city.
 
[b]Have you ever been a Metropolice Officer before?: No this would of been my first time. I never tried to apply for Metropolice.
 
 
[b]Character Biography (OPTIONAL):James was born in The United States Of America in the state Texas. It was hard growing up for James. Nobody talked to him, everyone ignored him, and nobody loved him. Only his parents and family loved him.
When he was first turning 17 Earth came into contact with the "Combine". That started a change in his family. James found a place to hide were "they" could not find him. Most of his family died exept for his parents. His parents risked their life so James could be safe. Everyone was dead, and he was alone.
James got furious and hated the Combine. But he knew they would kill him. He realized he didn't want to make the same mistake humanity did.
Its is the year 2012 now, James knew not to mess with the Combine. So, he decided to join the Combine.
 
 [b]Roleplay Example (OPTIONAL):
[A citizen begins running around the plaza in circles]

Me: Hold it right there!
Me: Citizen.
Citizen: Yes?
Me: Why were you running?
Citizen: I was trying to get to a place.
Me: No, you were running around the plaza in circles.
Me: Citizen.
Me: Wall.
Citizen: Ok...
Citizen: /me walks to wall facing it
Me: /me attempts to tie the citizen [Resist]?
Citizen: /me resists
Me: /me struggles to tie citizen
Me: /me lets go of citizens hands
Citizen: /me takes off running
Me: Hold it right there!
Me: /radio He's running!
Me: /me pulls out 9mm and attempts to shoot citizen in the leg
[We roll if the server allows it]
[I win the roll]
Me: /me loads 9mm
Me: /me fire 3 rounds at the citizens leg
[Citizen gets hit with 2 rounds causing him/her to fall down]
Citizen: /me falls over
Me: /me runs to citizen
Me: /me picks body up
Me: /me walks to nexus jail
Me: /me throws citizen in cell
Me: /radio I have a citizen in cell A-1 for resisting arrest
Me: /radio Awaiting orders

 
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IC INFORMATION
 
 
[b]NAME OF APPLICANT: James Rodriguez
 
[b]DATE OF BIRTH: July 7th 1990
 
[b]CURRENT DATE: May 1st 2012
 
[b]PHYSICAL TRAITS: Brown hair,Brown eyes,Small moustache and beard,White skin,Small hands and feet.
 
[b]NOTABLE SKILLS: I am a very fast runner that can run for a long amount of time,I am also a good sharpshooter.
 
[b]REASON FOR APPLYING: I want to help the Union put a stop to the crimes and rebellion in the streets.
 
[b]BLOOD TYPE: O+
 
[b]LOYALIST POINTS: 0
 
 
Thanks for taking the time to read my application. If it is denied I will work on it!
I promise.  

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Please, +support or -support this application, we need your opinion!

I will give you a chance. Support +


The backstory could be longer though....

I've seen him RP, he's good.

One thing I see you should work on are the /mes. /me walks to nexus jail. This is acceptable, but you could be more specific. Even if it is just breaking it up into /me walks over to the steps, climbing them. /me enters the nexus, dragging the man along. /me opens up a cell, throwing the man in and locking it.

But you seem to know your stuff. I've seen you RP too, and I see hard work put into this app.

+Support.

Thank you so much Bear and Kookie!

ACCEPTED.

I was kind of mixed on this one, but the responces are quite positive.
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